- Our main character is a guy going through depression due to work and personal problems.
- In the first scene, he will be walking over to the pub in frustration.
- He arrives to the pub and starts having a few pints.
- After getting a bit tipsy, he moves on to shots.
- The pub starts closing down, he goes outside for a cigarette and comes across a lady.
- They start a conversation about ongoing issues the both of them are going through.
- She offers the guy to go back to her house for a few more drinks.
- They walk back to her house.
- They start drinking.
- She offers a shot of tequila but puts some sort of drug in the shot glass.
- As soon as he takes the shot, he blanks out.
- He wakes up in his own bed, with a gun and blood on his hands and bed.
- He finds a note in his pocket from the lady, saying thank you for helping me out.
- He gets a sudden flash back of what happened.
Why I Like It:
- I like how the story progresses throughout.
- This story can be considered a mix between a drama/thriller and these are my favorite types of genres.
- I like the way that both characters have the theme of depression in common.
- The way the guy doesn't remember anything, leaves the viewers in suspense.
- The final scene where there is the flashback is a good way of presenting to the viewers what actually happened after the main character blanked out.
An excellent idea that would suit the constraints of the format well.
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